lack of the followings:- to establish that he is hungry and he has a date to go afterwards- he is fighting against TIME and his food is not ready- what is the resolution at the end and where is the drama/climax n the last act?Please RE-DO it !!
lack of the followings:
回复删除- to establish that he is hungry and he has a date to go afterwards
- he is fighting against TIME and his food is not ready
- what is the resolution at the end and where is the drama/climax n the last act?
Please RE-DO it !!